Thesis statement: Nowadays whether prefering to get up early in the morning and start the day's work or to get up later in the day and work until late at night has been an controversial issue. Although opponents prefer to get up later and work until late at night I prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work.
Reason 1: Getting up early in the morning is good for one's health. In fact, in the morning there is fresh air that has not been exposed to pollution. In other words, getting up early makes your mind and body much more healthy.
Reason 2: Provided that you get up early, you may finish your daily work and have much time to spend with your friends and family.
Reasons against: Not being able to keep concentration
Refutation of opponent's argument: At night the brain is proved to be tired because of day's work. Therefore it must be difficult to keep concentration at late times as night. However, in the morning you have your brain relaxed. As a result, brain will work properly and effectively.
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Please write your thesis statement in one sentence. If we take "Nowadays whether prefer(r)ing to get up early in the morning and start the day's work or to get up later and work until late at night has been a(n) controversial issue" as your thesis statement, we cannot decide your position or preference. Please make it clear.
ReplyDeleteThe rest is really well-developed. After you modify your thesis statement, you can write your paragraph.